Unknown and Unseen

Unknown and Unseen

A Poem by DrewBerry
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This is a spiritual piece written on a break at work. It was a cloudy cold spring day. I was DOWN, looking to the sky for guiadance, but the clouds were so dense at that moment, there was no Light.

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Northern winds invade my spring surprises today. 

Clouds so dense they obscure any semblance of Real Light.

 

Overshadowing the illusive joy just beyond the spirited blockade.

Penetrable quite easily in Truth, but visually too much for my small mind to see through.

 

Dare we trod into the unseen future with nothing but faith's wings to carry us up to the promised Light?

Trust in the unseen is Faith's Fickle Friend. Results too complex for this small soul's understanding! But knowing All is Well in spite of my misguided desires.

© 2008 DrewBerry


Author's Note

DrewBerry
Picture credit: From NOAA Photo Library and NSSL: http://www.photolib.noaa.gov/nssl/nssl0113.htm


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Did I say I was unsure whether I could write? I think I've got something here, but indeed the fickle friend is also a 'fair weather friend' - ha ha.

Perhaps here in the Cafe, I can move forward with this passion in a real and productive way.

~ Drewsberry Wine, not Whinethingy ~

Thanks for adding to your favs -> honored :)


Posted 16 Years Ago


"Trust in the unseen is Faith's Fickle Friend." is a lovely line, hmm I thought you were unsure about whether you could write, faith in oneself is the authors fickle friend too :) .
Just one typo ? trod = tread
Otherwise wonderful, meaningful and insightful
"Dare we trod into the unseen future with nothing but faith's wings to carry us up to the promised Light?"
Reminded me of the counterpoint, Dare we tread on the shifting sands where angels fear to tread . .
Faith is a little problematic like that, even for saints ! hence the expression the dark night of the soul
"But knowing All is Well in spite of my misguided desires"
And after night comes daybreak :)

~raventhingy

Posted 16 Years Ago



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DrewBerry
DrewBerry

Nashville, TN



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I am younger than my years. a Southerner. Christian. adventurous. a little crazy. funny. a cynical idealist. romantic. love everyone. am an advid photographer. a wanna be writer. music lover. hard wor.. more..

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