Frost

Frost

A Poem by DRD
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Its dark and warm all in one.

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A coldness stops thy beating heart, for broken souls whose love doeth part.

A time of ice and bitterness breeds, a heart of soul wrenching sorrow doeth lead.

A pray for warmth i doeth part, for this cold and bitter sweet sorrow that lives in thy heart.

© 2011 DRD


Author's Note

DRD
I wrote this when I read Twilight. It just wouldn't leave me alone.

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"soow" - ??? - Do you mean "sorrow"?
"A pray for warmth i doeth part" - "A prayer for warmth I do part" ("doth" is third-person singular - basically, don't use it in a place where you wouldn't say "does" in modern English)
"bitter sweet sorrow" - "bittersweet"


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I love Twilight and your poem is very pretty. :) Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

"soow" - ??? - Do you mean "sorrow"?
"A pray for warmth i doeth part" - "A prayer for warmth I do part" ("doth" is third-person singular - basically, don't use it in a place where you wouldn't say "does" in modern English)
"bitter sweet sorrow" - "bittersweet"


Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 17, 2010
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Dover, DE



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