Eyes

A poem about how no one can truely see everything.

Though these eyes have seen so little. 

They see the truth that lies do hide.

Forever bound to hide the secrets.

No law shall they abide.

 

As I watch you, I see the truth.

Awaiting my return, a message from you.

I see your lies bound by chain, strong yet breakable.

How do you plead, when I say good-bye

A strength that hides a weakness.

The body that has been broken.

A soul that no longer exists.

The gift of sight which is nothing more than a token.

When I see nothing.

A tear leaves my never watering eye.

The hint of what I feel.

That never leaves my inside.

 

Author's Note

I wrote this when I saw a baby deer,running through the woods. I added the last two parts. Sarah McConnaughey had asked me if was going to add more, this is what came out tell me if it fits or if I should change it.

Reviews

[Sarah McConnaughey]

It's beautiful and has excellent flow. Are you going to add more to it? :)

[DRD]

I don't know what to think of it, but I'd love to hear what you think.