Footsteps of safron? Wow, does he know how much that stuff costs? :)
Like the exotic spice that went to waste, so did the redolence and zest of his mistreated mate. Precious herbs, and savories just like piquant paramours in our lives are delicate, and need to be handled with respect, and a gentle touch.
Being a chef I thought this poem was going to about the actual spice, nevertheless, I wasn't disappointed by the least bit. You're poem was seasoned just right, and simmered to perfection.
i don't know how i found this poem but i'm really, really glad i did. the uncertainty, the sense of violation with a hint of responsibility, the painful well expressed images make this a sad and powerful poem.
This was beautiful. And a feeling I've struggled a lot with. There is a stigma placed on relationships, intimacy, sex... each one invokes a different feeling. But rarely are they good ones.
You need to understand yourself, your body, your feelings. You need to understand what you want, what you don't want, and why you do or don't. The relationship you're describing was missing something for you. Or perhaps it just wasn't giving enough. But to know that, you have to know yourself above all.
Find peace there, and finding peace with another person becomes much easier.
The poem itself was involved, but never breaching on overwhelming. Very lovely.
Best wishes,
Edie
Broken petals who lost their voices
A long time ago.
a beautiful stanza....such a fantastic engrossing read that hits anyone thats been in real painful hurtful love right at the core...love never is all sugar and spice.
Footsteps of safron? Wow, does he know how much that stuff costs? :)
Like the exotic spice that went to waste, so did the redolence and zest of his mistreated mate. Precious herbs, and savories just like piquant paramours in our lives are delicate, and need to be handled with respect, and a gentle touch.
Being a chef I thought this poem was going to about the actual spice, nevertheless, I wasn't disappointed by the least bit. You're poem was seasoned just right, and simmered to perfection.
Je m'appelle Lauren. I'm very dramatic. Other random things about me:
- I have a passionate love for all things ironic.
- 80% of what I say is sarcastic.
- I like big words. They are fun.
- I .. more..