Confetti Heart

My heart (always heavy)

Fell like confetti

From the sky –

Cut by a machete

That shone high

As it flew

From you

To my chest,

Hitting true,

Laying me to rest.

Author's Note

I really just wanted to rhyme confetti and machete.

Reviews

[Alexis L. Thompson]

Your really good! ^-^

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

Love and life can turn the strongest heart to confetti.
Nice use of words and imagery.

[Everett DeValle]

Awesome rhyme scheme. Nicely done.

[.]

"My heart (always heavy)
Fell like confetti
From the sky –
Cut by a machete'
~~i like this line and the hearts
description 'like confetti'~~
this poem speaks on so many levels...
(just beautiful)

:)

[Tony]

I like the contrasts you create with confetti and machete. Confetti symbolizing a party or good time but cut by a machete-- like a very bad party. Stark imagery-- I like the brevity here as well.

[Dillon Cotter]

i enjoyed this, especially the rhyme sceme. kinda short but gives a good point with a touch of imagery. well done!

-Will