Give Me

What I want.

Give me a look

             So that I know you are watching me –

             That I know to show off and attempt

             To impress you so you continue

             To watch me all night

        Because your eyes see into my soul –

        See into my heart –

        See past all the silly little things

        And right into me.

Give me a laugh

             So that I know I have captured your attention –

 That I know you appreciate my slight

 And slightly crazy attempts

 To make you smile

                                Because your smile shines into the shadows –

                                Shines into my heart –

                                Shines through my past to light

                                My egocentric world.

Give me a touch

                So that I know you are captivated –

                That I know I should continue

                To pour myself into you and

                Let you into my mind

                                Because your hands warm my body –

                                Warm my heart –

                                Warm up the frozen pieces with

                                Their delicate caress.

Give me a kiss

                So that I know I am wanted –

                That I know I am cared for

                And protected by something

                Much stronger than I

                                Because your lips embrace my emotions –

                                Embrace my heart–

                                Embrace and enhance my affections

                                Until I feel I could burst.

Give me your love

                So that I know I am a part of you –

                That I know you won’t forget me

                And will hold me tenderly

                Within your memory

                                Because your love will stand through time –

                                Will stand with my heart –

                                Will stand through the past and present

                                Into the unknown future.

 

 

Reviews

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

I love tha poem, its so simple, but scream for love and care on the other hand, its built in a special way , and so gentle and tender thank you Yossi

[Avery James]

It's so good. I like how it's separated into two different voices. One that's showing off and the other who is sensitive. Hard to explain, but I understand it. :)

[shinybluestars03]

Awesome the best i have read all night!!!
I love the way its structured
all very detailed.
Keep on writing,
Thanks for sharing

Best wishes