Wishes

Experimenting with rhyme.

 

She wished

Upon the stars

So high above

That she could

Live and die

For romantic love.

She wished

At the same time

Each day

That she could

Find the path –

Find her way.

 

She wished

That she could

Find one thing

That she loved,

That she owned,

That made her sing.

She wished

For her pessimistic

Urges to flee –

To be able to

Fly away

And just be so free.

 

She wished

That she could

Help someone

Without having

A secret reason

For having it done.

She wished

That she could

Be defined

Within one thing

That she loved –

Not just confined.

 

But most of all,

She wished

Upon her shooting star

That she could stop

Wishing and let

Life take her far.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

its all wishes dreamy wonderful wishes,i just loved those lines...
She wished
That she could
Help someone
Without having
A secret reason
For having it done.
She wished
That she could
Be defined
Within one thing
That she loved �
Not just confined.

But most of all,
She wished
Upon her shooting star
That she could stop
Wishing and let
Life take her far.
this is a very dreamy writing so wonderfully written ,i just like the way you kept saying ,i wish ,i wish,loved every word here...

[Courtney26]

How we all wish that on eday we could stop wishing lol!! Very true to the heart poem!

[Andromeda]

BEautiful!