You are so interesting. There is a Rod Serling quality in this poem (a high compliment). In the last few things I have read from you I hear a narrators voice. Very present, firm and guiding. Also very interesting.
You have passed "the I wish I could meet her at Starbucks for coffee" test. I'll bet many of your readers feel the same.
yes though its only a game we will have to think of how symbolic it is ,for only three of the four players in life or just the game,three will lose in this endless game of love ,also ironically these three will also lose in their love life too ,although i think ,only i think ,it may work in an other way ,when life plays too ,it will never let the winner the fourth to win it all for sure she will make him lose in love life if not in life as whole ,life is wicked i know,she will never let anyone win all the way ,thats her way of dealing things ,she let you win once and lose lots even lose your best ,she will never let you too much happy ,on the contrary ,once you were made happy even in a game then she will hit hard that you will never know happiness again too bad this life,i know ,i know...
You are so interesting. There is a Rod Serling quality in this poem (a high compliment). In the last few things I have read from you I hear a narrators voice. Very present, firm and guiding. Also very interesting.
You have passed "the I wish I could meet her at Starbucks for coffee" test. I'll bet many of your readers feel the same.
four players, three losers, and their fate entirely out of their own hands.
does this suggest that the winner is in control or is merely fortune's favorite?
Je m'appelle Lauren. I'm very dramatic. Other random things about me:
- I have a passionate love for all things ironic.
- 80% of what I say is sarcastic.
- I like big words. They are fun.
- I .. more..