Infallible

 

He was completely

            Temerarious

            Impetuous

            Injudicious

In his actions,

Always feeling,

Never thinking,

Just as they told him not to.

His defense was

            Incomplete

            Insincere

            Invented

When they would confront

Him and attempt

To force him

To contemplate

The consequences

Of his exploits

Before he did them.

But he,

Believing himself to be

            Unblemished

            Unsullied

            Untarnished

Did not listen.

 

It happened that he

Was precisely

As fallible

As you

Or

I.

 

             

Reviews

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Nice use of bigger vocabulary, and strong words. I like how you separate the stanzas out, and make it look appealing for the reader. nice job.

[Ed Rector]

we humans are all to falibal and is best we never forget that. anyway... i like how you displayed this one... easy to read and understand... well done

[Andromeda]

two things amazing: your alliteration & the last stanza and its line breaks