When I Look At Myself

When I Look At Myself

A Poem by Dreamy

 

When I Look at Myself

When i look at myself, is it me I'm looking at?

I'd like to think I'm my own person, not someone else's doormat.

When I look at myself, is there anything inside?

Always feeling so alone, yet smiling on the outside.

When I look at myself, is there anyone to love me?

Or do I keep my thoughts so close, that no one else can see?

When I look at myself, I often feel so lost.

I'd do almost anything to feel, no matter what the cost.

When I look at myself, I sigh,

And wonder where the time has gone, how it all just flew by.

When I look at myself, I smile,

and finally feel ok, if only for a while.

© 2009 Dreamy


Author's Note

Dreamy
Kinda down this day I guess. Wrote this in 2005

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This is such a good piece and I really feel I can relate to it. Good Job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


ah..!its a very nice piece...!i can relate to this...!
great work....love it..!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can relate to this! You have a straightforward, fresh, and raw way of expressing your emotions...I love it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 11, 2009

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Dreamy
Dreamy

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