Hit

The amity of it all

Is only temporary

Inhale

Hold it in

Don't let it out just yet

Exhale

Smoke clouds around me

The stench of hemp enshrouds my clothes

My skin

I'm not even here

Absent minded giggles

and mumbling of words

Incoherent

The swirly, hypnotic pipe burns my throat

And I cough

It's always better with a bong

But I don't argue

I just kind of float

I take another hit

No longer remembering why I was so tense

Doesn't matter now

I'm in a sea of green

Reality comes later.

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Very odd wrighting Hehe,Good use of words!! :) lol I know this I know all abt this!! This should be an adultery poem Hehe I love the way it touches different people :) everyone has their own little reaction :) well done and I see now why you wrote it like this :) Have to say I would have written this from left to centre to right. You know,like the the flow you go through :) but all and all very vivid :)

[Graveyardfuck]

I didn't put this in the mature category because I myself, am under 18 years of age.

[terry smith]

The other side of the page for the other side of reality....nicely done!

[JC]

gives a cool green vibe here, I'm digging your stuff more and more...maybe cause I come from the land of BC bud.

[Patrick O'Neil]

Lol,that just how I remember it , groovy . Great write.

[Jack Kennedy]

I like the way fact that the poem is to the right, and the green writing is also an attention grabber! 8/10

[Riley Bray]

I could really feel this poem! Good job chica.

[Phantom Heart]

I think its cool you put it on the right hand side and in green, smart.

[Bowers]

a great write, so realistic, many people turn to this when their going through tough times, you know, erase what we feel, temporary relief ... nice job!

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

I will remember these vivid words. They remind me of the distant past when the Bong show was still flitting it's pre-idol excellence outward through the solar system, beyond Saturn and into the cosmic great beyond.

100 tolken kittens

[Simon Welsh]

You're growing as a writer. Nice.

[Graveyardfuck]

Thank you f****t :)