~Julian~

Come close,

Darling

Let me kiss your sorrows away

Let me drive all your securities out with a touch

I'll do whatever it takes;

Pay any price

To take all that evil away

So please

Let me embrace you

Let me make all your fears dissipate

Frustration makes me cry

All I have to give is myself

And it doesn't work

It doesn't work

Please

Just...

Please...

Just let me...

Make you happy...

Reviews

[Patrick O'Neil]

Great as always, really desperate outcry for someone or that special someone. Emotional and true.

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

I am not letting you near my portfolio - drive away all my securities, eh? Poverty should ensue methinks! However, the rest, no problem. I'm kinda happy now but glue the horn back on the unicorn and we're good till sunshine shows itself again. :)

[Alisha Heistand]

Powerful, very powerful and thoughtful

[Haley Harrigan]

I love all of the work of yours that I read. I love this poem. It describes how I feel about a friend of mine right now.

[Death Girl]

I like your writing style. Nicely done once again

[Simon Welsh]

Happiness is a warm gun. Nice poem, again.

[Tarry Franck]

Flowed very nicely - very well penned

[Alexis]

This is such a touching piece, tears welded up in my eyes. I don't know what to say - but the fact that every word piecred me, knowing that you literally took the words out of my mind.

I really do enjoy reading your writing, I hope for you to write more.(:

And please don't hesitate to send me reading requests.