CAPS RAGE

NO!

NO!

THRICE IS THREE TOO MANY.

NO!

NO!

JUST ANOTHER GUY WHO LIES WHEN HE SAYS THAT HE LOVES ME.

 

~DAKOTA~

~TIMOTHY~

AND NOW

~DYLAN~

 

 ALL DRAGGED ME ACROSS HOT COALS

TOLD ME THEY CARED

THAT THEY LOVED ME

THEY KISSED ME

AND MADE FEEL SPECIAL

AND THEN PROMPTLY IGNORED ME.

 

AND I WOULD

JUST

COME

CRAWLING

BACK.

 

OBLIVIOUS.

 

I'M SO F*****G DUMB.

 

FALLING FOR THEM OVER AND OVER AGAIN.

DROWNING

IN MY OWN CYCLISTIC STUPIDITY.

 

I SHOULD JUST END IT.

SAVE EVERYONE THE TROUBLE

OF KNOWING

 

HOW

F*****G

STUPID

I AM.

 

Reviews

[Keith LaFountaine]

Young men are perhaps the dumbest, most ignorant creatures on Earth. Finding the right guy can often feel like finding a needle in a haystack, but it just takes time. Your poem definitely holds all of your emotion in a tight package, exploding to the reader all of your anger and frustration. I feel your words as much as I see them. That is not easily done. Good work.

[Graveyardfuck]

You can find a needle in a haystack easily, just set fire to it.

[Phantom Heart]

"IN MY OWN CYCLISTIC STUPIDITY" I like that you're strong with words.

[Haley Harrigan]

Oh, my. You've certainly decided that you've been used for the last time, haven't you, sweetie? Don't worry, not all guys are that way.

[Graveyardfuck]

I would hope so.

[Haley Harrigan]

Trust me, they aren't. There are some true gentlemen out there, beautiful.

[Nami Machae]

i love it! "Dragged me across the hot coals"i can feel the pain of this poem and truly believe that we have all felt pain like this.