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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
It Was Just A Dream, Just A Wonderful, Terrible Dream

It Was Just A Dream, Just A Wonderful, Terrible Dream

A Poem by Graveyardfuck
"

Help

"

It happened.

Again.

My dream guy,

Was another lie.

A

Terrible,

Horrible,

LIE.

 

He kissed me.

Yet,

A week later I find out he has a girlfriend.

That he's MADLY in love with.

 

Should I tell her?

I want to ruin him, extinguish him from existence.

But...

I don't have the guts to break up a relationship.

 

They could be meant for each other.

Well...

Couldn't they?

 

Karma...

Bad karma.

I don't want that.

I cannot bear that.

 

Broken and confused,

I don't know...

What to do.

 

Help

~

© 2013 Graveyardfuck


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Sweetheart, you should go to his girlfriend, and ask her "If I told you something about your boyfriend, would you believe me? It's important, and I swear I'm not lying." If she still loves him after you told her, it may be from denial that he did, or it may be because she still loves him deeply.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Guys operate by impulse sometimes thinking they're right. Girls believe what they are told through actions. It's like saying, okay you kissed me so that means you like me and want to see me. I think girls should gain more info before they accept any kiss from a guy. If that means "hold on, where are we going with this" so be it. Just my take.

As far as telling her, yeah, you should.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweetheart, you should go to his girlfriend, and ask her "If I told you something about your boyfriend, would you believe me? It's important, and I swear I'm not lying." If she still loves him after you told her, it may be from denial that he did, or it may be because she still loves him deeply.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brooke, you obviously need to change something in your way of choosing guys. Because every guy you thought as "perfect" hurt you in the end. Change something, please, or this will just continue happening to you for the rest of your life. And also, as you stated, "They could be meant for each other". If they were meant for each other, why did he cheat on her with you? Save that girl the heartbreak that you suffered from and do the right thing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Graveyardfuck

11 Years Ago

I don't know what's wrong with them. It seems to me that there is no guy that ISN'T like that. Becau.. read more
LadySoDivine

11 Years Ago

I'm sorry that you have to suffer like this but it is true that there ARE guys out there who are mor.. read more
A sorry poem and a bad karma on the story. I just wonder how people betray eachother. Anyways a lovely write from you and a joy to read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Graveyardfuck
Graveyardfuck

Fort Walton Beach, FL



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