Cinematic Gold

I hate you.

 

So much more, so much more then I used to.

You never learned, darling you never learned,

 

You'll never learn.

I'll sit back and watch this cinematic moment pass,

Hold on tight and enjoy the ride,

Let karma envelop your static choice,

With retrospective eyes I will see,

What you have become and soon will be.
...

And I will enjoy

every

 

 

moment

 

 with a tortured stare.

Reviews

[Dana Alsamsam]

in the second line i think you mean to say "so much more than..." as opposed to "then"

other than that super minor error, this piece was great! i could feel the tension and the painful satire in watching this person suffer as they yearn to have the subject back. it gave off a dark vibe of "it's just too late" great work!

[Alisha Heistand]

very powerful and full of emotion

[Ankur Sharma]

strong poem that shows the character passion