Two Feet- Too Easy?

My apologies for having not posted anything in a while. I've been busy.

I'm a zombie.

 I can't seem to walk on my own two feet.

 Only two?

 It can't be that difficult.

 Left foot, right foot, repeat.

 Yet I keep falling sideways.

 Will I ever learn how to walk?

 

Reviews

[Bowers]

I like this poem a lot. How many times do we find ourselves stumbling? How many times must we pick ourselves up after a hard fall? This poem makes me think of life trials taking fatuous steps, learning to walk again after every bruise, every break.
Nicely written. I like poems that make me think

[Patrick O'Neil]

Its a deep question that you're asking, hiding away in the simple image. I like it.

[Keith LaFountaine]

This is good. I like your flow. The pacing is pretty good for such a short poem, and you've got a lot of subtext. Nice work!

[Alisha Heistand]

Short and sweet...very good. I sense frustration and true questioning of ability in this. Never question yourself. Your a beautiful person who can write beautifully as well. You're doing great :)

[Dana Alsamsam]

great short and simple poem that made me think. you'll find something (or maybe someone) that will keep you walking on your two feet. keep writing out the frustrations, love.

[Simon Welsh]

Practise makes perfect, hon.

[unsavable_soul]

Nice,
Baby steps, a lot of the time we need to fall in order to pick our selves up. the picking up is the part that makes the walk worth doing. I don't think anyone ever really learns to walk. We all take steps but there can be no clear cut path to follow. Sorry for my away time, had things to manage and get my head back on straight. Missed you.
Chris
100/100

[Mr.Cardigan]

short and wicked awesome i like it alot

[chaotic katie]

I like it! Nicely penned.

[Luke Rawlings]

I like this one, a good meaning. Well done :)