Crowd

Just a little poem I wrote.

A crowd of fifteen thousand,

Will barely even budge.

But a crowd of two people,

Can move with just the slightest nudge.

Reviews

[Lexi Richard]

Oh wow, I really love this. Has a lot of meaning in it and could be looked at with many different perspectives.

[Hester Vane]

Simple yet full of meaning. Extremely well crafted.

[K.S.78]

That is so true! Very well done short and right too it!

[Patrick O'Neil]

True and with really great rhyme. Would have love to see if it could be developed into something more. But still its a simple truth spoken clearly and that is how truth must be.

[Dana Alsamsam]

ah and the beauty in growing up is becoming stable in our crowds of two :) this was simple and pulled off a great insightful message- good job

[Haley Harrigan]

Marvelous piece. I enjoyed reading this.

[Luke Rawlings]

The Bystander Effect. A brilliant poem, it would be excellent on a motivational poster. Maybe with a caption like "Conformity" or "Hero".

[chaotic katie]

i like this piece. Its seems to reign true, especially the way i think about it. nicely written.

[eglantine]

I guess I have to disagree with this poem--to me, the larger the crowd the more movement there can be. I've been to concerts where no personal bubbles exist--you are forced to move/sway with the crowd.

[KayK143]

Cute and well written. I love it!