Summer Daze

Kissing under the sweltering sun,

In an abandonded concrete tunnel.

 

Graffitied love

Sprawled around our hot bodies,

 

I fell in love with that hazel eyed smile,

Even though it was yesterday.

 

Alice N' Chains and Skid Row playing in the background,

Of our raging hormoines.

 

I crumple your AC/DC shirt in my fist,

As I feel every ounce of my tension dissipate.

 

I'm crying right now though,

Because I know,

 

Now

Is

Not

The

Time

 

You're not over her,

And I'm not over him.

 

How long,

Must I wait,

For another summer daze?

Nickolai...

 

 

 

Reviews

[Mina Salva]

I adore the ending, great work, thanks for the big inspiration!

[Simon Welsh]

Powerful. Love the references to some of my favourite bands.

[Patrick O'Neil]

Really nicely written, love the flash back to days gone bay " Alice N' Chains and Skid Row playing in the background, Of our raging hormoines.". made me think of the days when life was just that simple.

[Haley Harrigan]

Lovely, dear.

[Nami Machae]

i love all of your poems, very well done

[Dana Alsamsam]

summer always seems to bring on that phase of trying to get over someone or trying to move on, but i guess it's not always as easy as we think...this represents that beautifully. that carefree desire to just get the hell over it and have fun and f**k and listen to good music but that pang of guilt and sadness is always there telling you not to...good job!

[MimiW]

I really liked:
"Alice N' Chains and Skid Row playing in the background,
Of our raging hormoines."

This is a sad poem, but i like the spark of hope at the end in the form of a question.

[chaotic katie]

a peice with personality! 100/100 beautiful job.

[Another Poet]

Aaah how sad. But it is a beautiful poem. It makes me sad but everything in love can change. Only it takes time.

[Lexi Villanueva]

THis is sweet and lovey keeping writing.-100