Just Another Throw Away

I just... ~sigh~

I see myself in all of your writes,

~sigh~

But I know

That none are about me.

 

I'm a bitter girl,

Pondering on thoughts of suicide,

Filling my mind with black sorrow.

 

I'm just another stupid girl,

Just another throw away.

 

I'm a rewrite in your story,

Something easily erased.

 

You'll forget me someday,

But I cannot blame you.

 

A continent away,

You have better things to do,

Then to try to uplift the spirits of this poor girl.

 

I'm just another stupid girl,

Just another run away.

 

I'm a lost compass,

A dimming star.

 

You'll forget me,

And I fear it.

 

But I'm just a burden.

Just another throw away.

~sigh~

Reviews

[ScottWinchester]

Goodness.

This is a haunting piece of poetry. I sympathize with your inspiration here, and I believe you married skill and substance wonderfully. I wish I hadn't read it; I know these words too well, many of them I've thought myself, and remembering what I'd hope to forget is painful.

But there's no denying that you did very well, Wonderland, and that your ability is formidable. I hope you continue to write, as I expect to return and read all of your work, and I sincerely hope whatever's broken your heart has been undone.

- SW

[Graveyardfuck]

Thank you so much

[Lexi Richard]

The emotions packed into this are insane. I love your writing style

[Patrick O'Neil]

Really sad emotion, that so may feel day by day :"But I'm just a burden.Just another throw away.~sigh~".
I know that feeling well, nicely written.

[Nami Machae]

very well written, again you have been able to move me with the emotion and tone that you have managed to somehow perfect. keep up the good work and i will keep watching for another great poem

[Dana Alsamsam]

ah don't we all get into this gloomy mood when someone is happy and it's not because of us? great job. coincidentally i read this while listening to "heaven knows i'm miserable now" by the smiths and it fit very nicely! my only constructive criticism would be not to use black as an adjective to describe sorrow because it's a bit of a cliche. other than that- great write and i hope you feel better!

[Baby Ricochet]

Sadness. Much sadness.

[MimiW]

There is a whole bunch of feeling (emotion) in this piece. I esp. liked "i'm a lost compass, a dimming star."

[Another Poet]

This was very deep and sad. I love this poem!

[Ruthie Igunbor]

very familiar words if i do say so myself.
well done

[JoSephMacGown]

dude totally like this one... I like the whole sigh deal going on- and I like how your poems in general seem to be quite relatable to people- including myself...