Cady

I cannot help

But feel

Sympathy for you

But

I hate you

You were my bestfriend

Until

You stole something

That was mine

HE WAS MINE

Yet

Now

You have

Feelings for me

FOR ME

HOW CAN THIS BE?

I pity you

Darling

But

I cannot be yours

I do not

Feel the same

Even without the pain

I'm sorry

But you cannot

Have me

Only he

Though

He has moved on

From both of us

I miss you

As a friend

But

You've changed

And so have I.

Reviews

[plainme]

That's quite a situation you've got there! And visualised so well in words, clear like crystal. I can see through it. It's a rather harsh poem, but it's good like that, good way of showing your true emotions. The idea behind it is rather interesting, hard to get your mind wrapped around it. Maybe it's as hard for you as for me. Hats off, wonderful hand over of your feelings. Well done!

[Patrick O'Neil]

Wow,lovers triangle that went wrong. Its a difficult subject to write and you did it very well. The short verses almost , for me, is like how that conversation would be.Resentment and distant, with a very strong final close,that it over. Realy good write.

[Phantom Heart]

This happened to a friend of mine. I understand completely. People can be vain and being selfish and wanting what other's have. My friend's best friend did that to her and then he left the friend alone with a kid! then she took him for all he was worth kind of thing and still is dealing with him. My friend was like SHE GOT WHAT SHE DESERVED. Good poem, emotion provoking as you can probably tell by my review!

[Darling Dallas]

I love the backgroud of the story... the emotion is very strong. Great Write :)

[Darling Dallas]

:)