Cady

I cannot help

But feel

Sympathy for you

But

I hate you

You were my bestfriend

Until

You stole something

That was mine

HE WAS MINE

Yet

Now

You have

Feelings for me

FOR ME

HOW CAN THIS BE?

I pity you

Darling

But

I cannot be yours

I do not

Feel the same

Even without the pain

I'm sorry

But you cannot

Have me

Only he

Though

He has moved on

From both of us

I miss you

As a friend

But

You've changed

And so have I.

Reviews

[plainme]

That's quite a situation you've got there! And visualised so well in words, clear like crystal. I can see through it. It's a rather harsh poem, but it's good like that, good way of showing your true emotions. The idea behind it is rather interesting, hard to get your mind wrapped around it. Maybe it's as hard for you as for me. Hats off, wonderful hand over of your feelings. Well done!

[Amartolos]

you wrote a poem about cady O.O

[Graveyardfuck]

GO AWAY NIKITA

[Amartolos]

>:D MMMMMMMHMMMMMMMMMMMMM

[Nami Machae]

very nice

[sounds of shadows]

it's never easy or straightforward, is it? nicely done

[Lexi Villanueva]

For some crazy reason
I find this poem funny-100

[KellyAnn]

I feel like this piece is something a lot of girls can relate to, in a sense. Very nice wording. It's one of those pieces that makes you want to be like "Damn straight! You go girl!" at the end. Awesome:).

[Luke Rawlings]

A short and sharp impact from this one, it tells a twisted tale. Well done, I like this one :)

[Simon Welsh]

Brutal! I like.

[K.S.78]

Great goodbye letter. You were to the point yet still respectful and you showed your pain too. This poem has it all the emotion the words the structure and the rhythm! Great poem!

[Haley Harrigan]

Wow. It appears that this poem has more meaning than what is really said. This has obviously happened to you, as happens to everyone one time or another, that you once had a best friend who went after someone with whom you were infatuated with. Then, your friend grew weary of him and decided she "loved" you. You told her that you do not feel this way, that you only feel that way towards the one you love truly, but he does not love either of you and has moved on. You miss your friend deeply and wish desperately you had her back as your best friend, but you both have changed. She changed into a back-stabber, you have changed into someone who will be more careful next time.

[chaotic katie]

i love this piece, nicely penned!