We Want What We Cannot Have

We Want What We Cannot Have

A Poem by Graveyardfuck
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Poem I had to rewrite since my computer started dicking around -_-

"
once thought
That
Life could be like
Books
But
I was
Wrong
Fairy tales
Are meant for ink
And reality
Is meant for blood
Pain 
In novels
Is not like
Pain in the 
Real world
Out here
Pain 
Sticks with us
Forever

I was
Oblivious Oblivious...

To the fact
That
You did not
Care
My heart
Fell away
Sprawled out
On a bed of asphalt
Gazing at stars
That held a
Different meaning
After you
Said...
"Now's not the time"
Books
In books
It'd be different
In books
You'd take me
Away
From all of this
Pain
But no

We cannot have
What we
Want
We want 
What
We cannot have
After this
I retreat
To my
Vodka throne
Of less tears
And less
Worries
With the
Thoughts
Of you
Drowned
Out
By my preffered poison
And realised
Books
Are nothing
Like reality
Nothing...
One shot
Two shot
Three shot
See you in the morning
Reality...

© 2013 Graveyardfuck


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Great emotion in this poem. My favorite line is "Fairy tales
Are meant for ink" So true, I think. Why do we always want what we cannot have?! Well for that I guess there are many reasons. I can relate to your poem. "Vodka throne" is another great line. I think the way you set up the poem gives it that extra kick. Thanks for the read request!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is really deep. I loved it and most of it is actually true.

Posted 11 Years Ago


"Fairy tales
Are meant for ink
And reality
Is meant for blood" loved this one especially!!!! A great poem.......loved reading it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


It is what we make it aside from what it is around us. Excellent read and write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The concept is good, but I feel like there was no rhythm. The lines could be longer in my point of view and maybe some punctuation to emphasize, although poems do not need it. Take Care! Stay Strong! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


"Reality is meant for blood" had an audible 'woah' to it.. this is very good penmanship. Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


i love the worldplay and comparasing you did, its really brilliant

Posted 11 Years Ago


I absolutley love this. So much emotion. Great Write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Fairy tales
Are meant for ink
And reality
Is meant
For blood"

these lines are truly beautiful! don't we all wish we could escape and shimmy are broken ways into the pages of a novel...weave our lives between the ink and forget that we're made of blood. this captures that sentiment perfectly! who needs reality when we can just write or read whatever fiction we want- great work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great emotion in this poem. My favorite line is "Fairy tales
Are meant for ink" So true, I think. Why do we always want what we cannot have?! Well for that I guess there are many reasons. I can relate to your poem. "Vodka throne" is another great line. I think the way you set up the poem gives it that extra kick. Thanks for the read request!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love this, one of my favorites! 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Graveyardfuck

Fort Walton Beach, FL



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