Great emotion in this poem. My favorite line is "Fairy tales
Are meant for ink" So true, I think. Why do we always want what we cannot have?! Well for that I guess there are many reasons. I can relate to your poem. "Vodka throne" is another great line. I think the way you set up the poem gives it that extra kick. Thanks for the read request!
The concept is good, but I feel like there was no rhythm. The lines could be longer in my point of view and maybe some punctuation to emphasize, although poems do not need it. Take Care! Stay Strong! :)
"Fairy tales
Are meant for ink
And reality
Is meant
For blood"
these lines are truly beautiful! don't we all wish we could escape and shimmy are broken ways into the pages of a novel...weave our lives between the ink and forget that we're made of blood. this captures that sentiment perfectly! who needs reality when we can just write or read whatever fiction we want- great work!
Great emotion in this poem. My favorite line is "Fairy tales
Are meant for ink" So true, I think. Why do we always want what we cannot have?! Well for that I guess there are many reasons. I can relate to your poem. "Vodka throne" is another great line. I think the way you set up the poem gives it that extra kick. Thanks for the read request!
Welcome! Welcome all to the esoteric world of Brooke's Wonderland!
Speculate over my alluring, yet ominous creations.
Observe my nightmarish allegories.
But do not forget, this dreamland has an eve.. more..