Love Cannibal

Love Cannibal

A Poem by Graveyardfuck
"

I have nothing to say.

"
You don't love me,
You don't love me,
At least not the way I want you to love me.
"Just a friend,"
"Just a friend,"
EVERY F*****G TIME THEY SAY!
After leading me on for months on end!
Crumpled bed sheets,
To sedate your sinister desires.
Just a friend...
Another broken razor...
Because no one can love me,
The way that I love them.
Why
Do
They 
Lie?
 
Brown eyes- innocence and comfort
Green eyes- trust
Yet,
I can trust neither.
Maybe...
Before suspended in air....
I should think
Before
f
a
l
l
i
n
Because I always end up,
On the concrete.
Loveless,
And 
       tired
               of
                   trying.

© 2013 Graveyardfuck


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Ahh don't worry hon. There's more people out there. I like.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lots of raw emotion and nice to see you exploring the white space. I do suggest inserting some concrete images to heighten the experience.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. I can relate to this. This is badass and just amazing. I love this. Great work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Graveyardfuck

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the review. :)
LostandAlone

11 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)

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Added on May 31, 2013
Last Updated on May 31, 2013
Tags: love, breakups, ex, relationship, friends, friendzone

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Graveyardfuck
Graveyardfuck

Fort Walton Beach, FL



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