Love Cannibal

I have nothing to say.

You don't love me,

You don't love me,

At least not the way I want you to love me.

"Just a friend,"

"Just a friend,"

EVERY F*****G TIME THEY SAY!

After leading me on for months on end!

Crumpled bed sheets,

To sedate your sinister desires.

Just a friend...

Another broken razor...

Because no one can love me,

The way that I love them.

Why

Do

They 

Lie?

 

Brown eyes- innocence and comfort

Green eyes- trust

Yet,

I can trust neither.

Maybe...

Before suspended in air....

I should think

Before

f

a

l

l

i

n

g 

Because I always end up,

On the concrete.

Loveless,

And 

       tired

               of

                   trying.

Reviews

[Author Anonymous]

So powerful! You definitely mirror how I feel sometimes, great piece!

[Hester Vane]

I really like this piece. The formatting really helps to convey the sense of frustration! A great write

[Luke Rawlings]

A very relatable and well written piece. From the second one of yours that I have read tonight, I must say that I have never seen the structure utilised quite as well as you do. The mood inspired was very good. Well done! :D

[K.S.78]

Wow, you literally gave me chills. Tired of trying when it is always for nothing and you end up feeling s****y instead of loved. Great write! Oh, and really like how you designed it too

[Molly]

I really liked this. I could feel the emotion behind it and it was arranged very well. I like the structure overall and there was this strong voice throughout the entire poem. Great job!

[chaotic katie]

very emotional piece, well written i enjoyed reading

[quinfinn]

you penned the anger and betrayal extremely well in this very cleverly worded and masterfully arranged write. this is real, honest to goodness, kick a*s poetry madness! well done!

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

Excellent! I like everything about the way that you've rendered this vicious cycle of love's longing for equal attraction, followed by disenchantment, disillusionment and feelings of hopeless abandonment. The format is supporting and well-crafted too. A worthy poem, Brooke.

[Lexi Villanueva]

I might be just a freshman but u have a lot of talent hidden inside of you.
And theirs more fish in the sea

[Alisha Heistand]

Wow. That's really deep and meaningful. You posess a gift, my friend; Very Nice.