Pay Your Toll

Remorse? Non.

Little s**t,

You're getting what you deserve.

You're pregnant, it seems.

But, I'm not sorry.

I wish I was sorry.

You're moving.

I wish I felt remorse.

But I'm not feeling anything. 

I'm numb.

Because of you.

This friendship seems bittersweet.

At least, it was...

Your eyes glitter a sad blue.

But behind those eyes?

Insanity.

And lust.

I'd apologize for not being there for you.

But that would be a lie.

You didn't want my help.

And now, I see you never deserved it.

I'm sorry for nothing.

But I can think of a thousand things,

You should apologize for.

Him...

My love.

The only thing that anchored me to sanity.

I clinged on,

To the rope he lent me.

But...

You severed it.

He was in your service,

A petty little possession of yours.

He still is.

I lay helpless,

Rolling in all of the sins you commited.

I had to pay the price,

Of your demise.

I'm a broken clock.

A pendulum that has stopped swinging.

But...

Everything ends eventually, right?

Oh, how I hope to see your ending.

I wish to see your ending.

I wish to see you pay your toll...

Reviews

[Account Closed]

This is a strong piece! It really startles you! Buts its fell written.

[unsavable_soul]

Yea and nay,
First off I love the ideas in this, they are strong and wrought with emotion, you strike home with deft accuracy in this sense. I was not really feeling the conveyance, there is in my opinion not enough to pull me into reading it. I get the point but that is pretty much it. I think it is not in par with the creativity of some of your other works. This is all my opinion and honesty, don't get it wrong I like this but I also think it could be better as well.
Sincerely
Christopher
80/100

[Roxii]

The emotions ricocheted through my being...They brought up old memories. This piece is one of my favorites that you have written so far.

[chaotic katie]

very powerful emotion, i like!

[Simon Welsh]

Brutal. I like.

[JulieÉmile]

Such a nice way to express emotions. Everyone who had experienced betrayal should read this. Takes a lot of wisdom to write such lines.

[Crimson Bayonet]

Ah, I love revenge poems or stories. This one is quite the rarity. This poem is really good :)

[quinfinn]

revenge is a dish best served cold....and remember, even a clock that is broken is right twice a day. nothing worse than a friend's betrayal....do what i do, let karma take care of it. very good write!

[minnie:)]

This is a really good poem, the emotion and the words pop right off of the screen.
~Minnie