I Am Dreamland

I'm under the ocean,

Inhabited by abberant creatures.

It's dark...so dark.

But I can feel the pulse of life.

Life under reality.

With all the vibrancy never known by man.

I am Dreamland.

Ruler of the alternate worlds,

Of the kingdoms, the Universe.

Infinetly-infinite.

I hold the power of everything.

It is irrefultable.

Reality is the Nightmare...

Underneath, life thrums and pulsates,

Existing only in dreams.

The Land of a 1,001 Words...

This is mine.

The Heavens- Non existent

Faith is only a word

Philosophy is a joke

And school is an imprisonment from real erudition.

Curiosity is pure

Science is evil.

Everything that is uncomprehensional to the human mind exists here.

The hidden cranks and spokes of the mind;

disected

Wonders beyond concsciousness.

I

hold

it

all.

Reviews

[Fernando Pessoa]

Such an insightful vastness is found in your existence. Here are the demons and angels all thriving in this alternate world we too often deny. Love your implications and metaphors.

"Dreams are answers to questions we haven't yet figured out how to ask." ~ X-Files

[Desiree Swendsen]

The power in this poem is absolutely wonderful. I love the intensity! Have you ever heard of a band called nightwish? this reminded me a little of their album "Dark passion play" you should check them out, based on your writing style you might enjoy it!

[pandorascollar]

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. You are an amazing and talented poet!

[Ethale Captor]

The Wonderland of Existence, very intriguing. Very well written, the layout is very fitting. Well done over all.

[Kenneth Stephen Goodpas..]

This is a great piece of poetry. One grammatical observation, you generally want to spell out numbers. Anyways, wonderful poem.

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LOVED it! Especially this part:
Curiosity is pure
Science is evil.

It somehow got to me, great poem! 100/100

[Jessica Gillitzer]

wow, this is so many layers of deep. it is amazing that you define yourself with such well written abstract clarity. You define the power over all things in your existence so powerfully. i really like this and don't know if i could write something this strong.
Lovin' it
< 3 Jessie

[Riley Bray]

Good job. :)

[Simon Welsh]

Brilliant :)

[quinfinn]

absolutely stunning verse. well thought out and cleverly penned. well done!