The Clouds

Whispy clouds,

Billowing out like charcoal smoke,

Stretching across the sky,

Like the aftermath of a fire,

Like the destruction of a thousand demons,

A legion racing across my vision,

Snow white fire,

Wonderous, 'o clouds,

My vision betraying what lies beneath,

In the Heavens,

The Clouds.

Reviews

[Criss ;)]

This's nice write fella....!
i liked this peace much, you dropped here reality's few moments...i was flyin' indeed when i was readin' this piece...lol, i'd made some views of clouds...mist...smoky air.
well write fella...you know what words're powerful, i liked this one
Snow white fire,
Wonderous, 'o clouds,
My vision betraying what lies beneath,
In the Heavens..

what a lovely stanza....well penned.
have a nice writin' fella...!!
have this 94.7/100 :)
take care ;)

[Tamara Jaber]

Nice one, good work.

[Gary Motherfucking Oak]

You're amazing when it comes to writing poems... Making something as simple as clouds so vivid and descriptive. Lovely.

[Simon Welsh]

I love it :) 'Snow white fire' really stood out as imagery.

[Ethale Captor]

Nice write, I like the creativity on what some may see as such a bland topic, clouds. You successfully brought it to life, and in so few lines. Great work.

[Extant]

Seems like a storms moving in . . . creative way to describe something we see daily (usually). I'm a bit confused about the last three lines, though that might just be me. Otherwise excellent word choice.

[Ezekiel Silver]

Great poem! I like how vivid the description is. Nice job on this piece!!!