Pale Horse

Needles in my eyes,

Razors in my wrists,

Anything that will help me forget.

The pain twists like acid in my stomach,

All the hell in my heart has broken through,

And it's all because of you, all because of you...

I'm apart of nothing,

Designed for just empty space,

Imbedded into this world like stolen lace.

Dust rains from the shelf,

Because no one ever cared,

I'm all alone and it's not fare, it's not fare...

I'm a pale horse, 

Freezing in the river,

All the pain and misery causes my body to shiver,

It was never the weather...

And it's all because of you, all because of you...

Reviews

[minnie:)]

Wow, this poem, what's the right word? Outstanding, the words from this poem made me shake, I could feel the pain throughout this poem. It was GREAT :)
~Minnie

[Simon Welsh]

I love this poem but the pain in every word makes me shudder. That last stanza really hits home.

[Kenneth Stephen Goodpas..]

I like it, I wish I could truly dissect it and explain how each of the individual bits speak to me, but I am exhausted. Anyways, truly sad and wonderful.

[pandorascollar]

Wonderful poem. You really are good at putting words together to create something amazing!

[quinfinn]

sometimes we write from merely a stream of consciousness. these can be our best and most captivating writes. this is a fine example of penning our thoughts without hesitation for opinion...awesome

[Tricia O'Brien]

This is sick as all hell. I dig your style and the way you put this together is just beautiful
Keep spitting

Much love & respect

Trish-