Sin and Seduction

Thoughts plague the mind, leading to my unforgivable sin~

Push me up against my sin

You're the seduction that reels me in.

Bite me, break the flesh

Pull my hair and forget the rest.

You've become my only means to forget

Every time you rip my clothes off; make me wet.

I was dead and broken

Lost in my emotions.

Then you came and captured my broken heart

I can't press rewind, but I can press restart.

Take me away, I'll never leave

Because you're my only reason to breathe...

Reviews

[JC]

sensual and pleading..how sex and sin and any kind of touch, rough or smooth, can make us feel alive and forget that darkness...

[Patrick O'Neil]

Agreement with the rest, and it also has a nice rhyme to it.

[Eagle Cruagh]

An incredible outpouring of emotion,
desire, longing and wanton pursuit of
life.
Thanks,
-----Eagle Cruagh

[LadySoDivine]

Very emotional and very passionate. It actually paints a picture before my eyes. I love it, great job!