First Love

First Love

A Poem by Lauren
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This is a very old poem, and my most "famous" one to date with over 27,000 notes on Tumblr.

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I was many things to you.
A good morning text
that was the same everyday. 
A kiss on the lips
that deepened itself over time. 
An intoxicated
phone call at 2 am.
A minor chapter that will
surely be forgotten once
the next one comes along
and gives you something
new to remember.
But for me
you were the
example of
how I will 
feel about
everyone
I ever meet.

© 2014 Lauren


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A kiss on the lips
that deepened itself over time....beautifully written, loved these lines!! Great job Lauren!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lauren

9 Years Ago

thank you!
"A kiss on the lips, that deepened itself over time." I have to say, that was my most favorite line! Keep it coming.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lauren

9 Years Ago

thanks girl:)
hi there, you've really had quite an experience in love, haven't you? Well it shows in your poems. Nicely written! Great job. :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


"that was the same everyday.

A kiss on the lips
that deepened itself over time."

A sweet and lovely write. Thank you for posting...:)........


Posted 9 Years Ago


The lessons of love teach us. More dogs than good people.
"A minor chapter that will
surely be forgotten once
the next one comes along
and gives you something
new to remember."
It is sad we must learn the bad lesson and learn to go slow and easy into love. Real love don't rush. Need time to grow and become solid. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry for the emotion of love and need.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


It's like.. ugh! I don't know how to describe it so I'm going to use taste. It's like blueberries.. sweet, but the sweetness softens and fades.. like how I imagine peonies smell.. delicate. Delicate! Yes that's the word. It's delicate. I like it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lauren

9 Years Ago

I love this review! Thank you so much! :)
Meraki

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome :)
I really liked this piece. :-)

Kaze~

Posted 9 Years Ago


I really liked it! Thanks for sharing:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lauren

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

You are welcome!
that was really good, it tells a good love story :) :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lauren

9 Years Ago

Thank ya:)
Justin

9 Years Ago

your welcome, it is like a teenage love story :)

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