When I met you..

When I met you..

A Poem by Melody
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A poem about when i met.... you.

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When I saw you I was afraid to meet you.
When I met you I was afraid to kiss you.

When I kissed you I was afraid to love you.

Now I love you and I'm afraid to lose you.

<3

© 2012 Melody


Author's Note

Melody
When I wrote this I was thinking about him

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That's adorable :) I like how each line is linked to the previous, helps it flow.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this poem. Beautiful writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Short and sweet. Nice job. :)
-Aud

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Wonderful and so true.
Sounds like the chorus for a song.
We have all been there.
I say after much heartbreak, "Don't let another person define your value on this earth."
Good work. Keep writing


Posted 12 Years Ago


Very beautiful. I love the way that this flows.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Welcome to WC sweetie....

I look forward to reading you. Your bio is perfect. Be yourself, write what you want...and you'll find yourself with quite the following, not to mention...meet some lifelong friends.

Muse

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a wonderful little write...

Amazing job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a sweet poem. Wonderful job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Melody
Melody

Miami, FL



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