I lost you

This is told from the view of a girl who's boyfriend has recently died, through a fault of her own. Of course, you could tell it as if she had just broken up with him, I don't care, really.

You were my rock, the one I could hold on to when I was swept up in the tide, in the ocean of life.

You were my beam, the one I could hang from when the ground was far beneath my feet, when I was scared of falling.

You were my sky, the one I could look up too and think, “Life’s perfect,” and not have to worry about things.

You were my saviour, the one who caught me when I fell, the one who told me to get up again.

And I lost you, because of my own, selfish heart.

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[allonsy_doctor]

I love it!!! How do you write such touching pieces? I know!! Because your a awesome writer!!

[CLUTZ]

yes i do......!!! I love the picture for it too,,,,but tht's really not all tht important. very nice indeed

[Eagle Cruagh]

Beautiful !

My fondest wish is that you find your Rock .

Words fail me, this is romantic, ethereal, sweet.
Thank you for this treat.

----- 'Eagle Cruagh

[17thWhitePrince]

it was very nice indeed ... especially the end where you lost the person because of your "own, selfish heart" ... very well done ...

[Little Amy Lee]

I love the discription in this poem
its beautiful
good work
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