Fullmetal Dream

Fan poem for the anime "Fullmetal Alchemist"

Who knew of such perfection in a smile?
Such radiance in a single tear?
Until I ripped it away from you with my deception
The world of our innocence is but a distant memory now
Your touch a metallic dream
But I promised to turn back time for you

We’ll keep running ‘til we reach the heaven we don’t believe in
Grasping for an imaginary ray of light 
That burns red with the blood we shed
Guilt sweeps through the wings we’ve built together
Crushing them with the help of the blazing sun

But I won’t let you fall
Let our passion be your savior
Flying us over this sinful night
And until we reach the morning sky
I’ll be your fullmetal dream

Author's Note

You may have seen this on my former account Animus.

Reviews

[Arthur N Known]

Best poem evar. A million out of ... something smaller than a million

[SilentVerses]

Really like it, the words float around easy on the eyes, beautiful and full of movement as they portray desire and devotion raw and depicted through gorgeous metaphors lined with gracefully succinct words.

[Elysia]

The third piece of yours i have read.. I don't like it as much as the others, but it is still very very good. it's probably just that im not in the mood for the genre right now, so awesome work :)

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Let our passion be your savior
Flying us over this sinful night
And until we reach the morning sky

I love these words here, This is one amazing write.
I enjoyed reading this.