Silenced With a Kiss

A poem about the oddity of romance

It is every girl’s dream to be silenced with a kiss

A press of lips, that takes her breath away

And makes her forget all she had to say

Except mine

 

When I dream of love

I dream of poetry

Where whispered somethings are never whispered nothings

And I am never silenced

 

So preoccupied are we

With visual sensation

I do not paint my lips

For it will taint the sparkle of my conversation

 

It is every girl’s dream to be silenced with a kiss

A press of lips, that takes her breath away

But I

I have something to say

Reviews

[Elysia]

I love it. it really says exactly what you want to say. I must agree, i would be very annoyed if i was silenced with a kiss in the middle of something important! what's moe, you say it with feeling, and in a way that is not just a rebuttle to the idea, but a romantic statement in itself. At least, that is how it seems to me.

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. and you say it so poetically ... oh wow! ... that's a breathtakingly beautiful verse about the oddity of romance ... cheers to oddity ...

[deeps]

This is ever so wonderful and powerful

[Sweets]

I love it. Such a great poem (:

[My Fair Lady]

I enjoyed this very much. I am always so glad to see girls be the exception to the rule, to stand outside the box and be glad to be the one with an opinion. I like your "rebellion" against what other girls do, with the personal fortitude to stand for what you believe. Nice.

[Petal]

this is so amazing powerful write