Oh Dreamer

Oh Dreamer
You beckon me with flashing eyes
To join you by the fireside
And celebrate our sins

 

Dancing close to the embers bright
I missed the ash upon my feet
 And as you sang me ancient rhymes
I near forgot to scream

Reviews

[Claire's-Girl]

I really enjoyed the scene you built in this, and the hint of ambiguity, but some of the rhymes felt too convenient and compromised it. Still, well done!