Alone

A deep Story in Few words..

And after a long session of dreams...he have learnt how to live ALONE...

Author's Note

Feel the pain of loneliness..

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I applaud you for trying an original expression, short and sweet, leaving much to the imagination. But my personal preference is for a writer to put more into a story than this little bit. I feel your message needs more to bridge the gap between dreams & living alone. I like to leave some things for the reader to figure out, but I think you're leaving EVERYTHING for the reader to figure out. I like the starting point & the ending point, but I want you to work harder to draw me a word picture that shows me the path you are describing between these two points.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Nice one small yet up to the mark.

[Nidhi]

thnx to like my effort 😊

[APOORVA]

i can totally relate to this line, when your biggest dream that becomes your life, leaves you...nothing lefts.