That Magical Music

A Music which never makes sound..

Sometimes when I glad life's cold ,
Sometimes when my all dreams fade.
Sometimes when unfortunates hold,
Then an unheard Music gives me shade.

I know not how but,
These ditties of no tone..
Makes my two eyes shut ,
Send me in comfort zone.

It sends me in Mermaid's world,
Makes me feel like pink mermaid.
And still this music is unheard,
But yeah! It burns my worldly dread.

This magical music help me in pang,
But I, only I can hear it's twang.

Author's Note

Feel the unheard music of soul..

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Good description of this mysterious situation. Even tho in your author's note, you explain that it's music of soul, while reading, I was thinking about how a person "hears" the music he/she grew up listening to, even when it's not playing, it's still echoing in our heads, reminding us of things we long for, regret, miss, or embrace from earlier times. The best part of this poem is that it's expressed in an original way, even tho the message is familiar & relatable.

[Ankit Miglani]

Just like poetry , music is subjective as well. For some it's a sound , for some it spins their whole world around.
A nice piece of work , the rhyme itself has it's own music .

[Nidhi]

thnx for ur positive words..it means a lot for me

[AYUSH]

i really liked it... but not in terms of language ;
in terms of your writing.. :)

[Einstein Noodle]

not easy to capture the music of the soul ..nor of the spheres ;) but don't we all love those kinds of attempts .. the syntax is reflective of English not being your first language .. had to read several times to get into the pictures and emotions of your poem .. we all have special quiet,safe places in times of turmoil ..to find refreshings and gather strengths to carry on .. very relatable .. but unique to each of us ... a challenge to hold to a more classic form for your poem .. so from one who is terrible at it .. God bless you ;)
E.

[Lady Glitter]

Very good descriptions of feelings, such as an inner music giving you shade from fading dreams and unfortunate circumstances. "Ditties of no tone" is so expressive, and how the music helps you in pang is too.