Dwell

Dwell in the ocean of dreams

on the waves

up and down

up and down

like the waves of a stormy night

on the sea

dwell in the ocean of hope

my sweet friend

like the kittens play

ignoring the world around

just play like kittens

come with me

just like the kittens

just have fun

without a goal

without time

Dwell in the ocean of dreams

like the Kittens play

having Fun with eachother

Reviews

[Red]

First, I love kittens. Second, I love the excessive use of the metaphor. It makes the poem very free and light hearted. I appreciate the picture and the emotion you offer, love, but not so irritating, as (in my opinion) love poems tend to be. You did seem to capitalize some things that I wouldn't capitalize, but maybe you did that on purpose? Thank you for sharing this with us. I think you can elaborate more and what not but otherwise, wonderful job.