Rainy Blues

Rainy Blues

A Poem by TheRaven
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We the trees are blue sometimes.

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Blue cherry blossoms
Bloom from the weeping tree's dreams
Turned to floral pain

© 2016 TheRaven


Author's Note

TheRaven
I liked the way it sounded. I don't know, guess I was feeling blue.

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I like how you manged to show that even three sentences, and thirteen words can make a deep poem if you let it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This poem sounded very eloquent. I love the metaphor (at least that was my interpretation). Its sad but satisfying.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is very ent-like.
Blooms are given when things are sad or die too.
But these flowers I don't think are meant for anyone but the tree itself.
Hopefully this is as short lived as the blossoms.

Posted 8 Years Ago


TheRaven

8 Years Ago

Ent-like! Lol, love it. Lord of the Rings is friggin' lovely. You have different ways of viewing thi.. read more

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Added on April 1, 2016
Last Updated on April 3, 2016
Tags: sadness, tears, blue cherry blossoms, beauty, beauty of sadness