Baby, Wear My Crown

Love song!

Sweet, sweet baby, come through to my town
Make me feel like a king, so you can try on my crown
Come share with me, my throne
Let me lift you up.  Don't sit me down
Come on, come on, baby
Come wear my crown

Come share my quarters.  Come sing my tune
You came a long way, baby
I came a long way for you
Come share with me
What I have for you
Come wear my crown
My crown
Oh, my crown

You don't lie to me baby.  You don't beat me down
You can be my queen, my darlin'
You can share with me, my crown
Come lift me up.  I won't put you down
Come on, come on, baby
Sugar, wear my crown

Author's Note

JG, summer 2009

Reviews

[SweeTLoU]

good s**t bro it flows and i like the vibe

[northern monkey]

Like this Justin, uplifting, good song for writing to!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Love the rhythm of this one. Sassy!

[HB]

Cute. ^.^ Record it??

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

I have the David Bowie song "Heroes" playing through my head while reading. Excellent poem.

[Emily]

Good write! I like the rhythm of it.

[Amy Bumpas]

Love the visual of the long southern drawl...lol!

[OT]

ha it is a playful write for sure - the rhyme ripples well throughout carrying the words along to a nice little beat!! nice!

[Cerebriation]

I have had this for a while. I dunno why I never posted it to any website!

[Linear]

Lyrical flows the words of this your poetic crown, and a fine tune you make Bravo :O)