Two Good to Be True

Too goofy and cute
One pink and one blue
She's loud and astute
But a beauty to view
Rather fast does she scoot
Quite a daunting pursuit
He's aware and acute
Exclamations are few

Two, goofy and cute
She's three, he'll be two
Our beautiful fruit
Two good to be true

Author's Note

For Anistyn and Layne

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is one of the most imaginative & original “kid” poems I ever saw! This is so playful & obviously packed with affection! I can see & feel the nonsensical aspect to the goofy details you share. Your rhymes are also nicely crafted for an unexpected quality (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Cerebriation]

I have gotten such insanely mixed reviews on this piece. It's either the most beautiful thing conceived by man or a contrived and Ill worded excuse for poetry... Lol

[barleygirl]

Sentimentality is frowned upon in poetry, except amongst us nostalgic old timers! *wink! wink!*

[Cerebriation]

Well I'm not changing my style because someone finds me somehow unpleasant lol...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A truly magical quality to the piece, stirring and fearless, well done, good read.

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful story shared in the poetry. Children can make us laugh and they can entertain us. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote