Trusting the Devil

Blodied bodies piled on the ground
One sacrafice turned into many

A goat's head on the altar
A pentagram traced on the wall

Devils little minions bringing more
A bunch of people lined up at the door

Tragic death awaits them all
As masked deamons take them one by one

Each slaughtered in different ways
All their souls for the Devil's taking

Blood lapped up by the dogs of Hell
Flesh torn from the bone for the meals of many

Man eating man
Reverting to primitive times

Sulking in despair
Of the Devil's broken promise

To burn in hell
Is all they have aquired

Tortured forever for what they've done
That one mistake will be their last

For trusting the devil, that knaving thing
Will never turn out great, you see

Reviews

[Crow]

A unique piece that seems to fit the upcoming stereotypical belief of the season, though I am getting a deeper meaning of cause and effect. The evils of our world and avoiding them is the message I seem to be receiving.

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

Oh i know i have researched alot about religons.. There is no doubt in my mind that Satanism isnt even about Satan.... Just thought this poem may tickle the fancy of some people streotypical or not. Because i know not everyone feels the way you do or even know that either ....

[RedInk524]

Interesting and i like the detail, but this is very stereotypical. Real satanism is nothing like this. In fact, a most satanists dont even worship satan. They worship themselves. Not only that, but they even have thier own church and rules and guidlines of conduct. Yes there are extremists that may do this stuff, but it isnt real satanism. Satanism is nothing like what people make it out to be, its actually just like any other religion. Try doing a little research and make sure its credible.

[lostboy]

when people lie and trust in these lies to give them greater freedom .. they dont realize they are imprisoning themselves.