The verses of the day

Cab you explain it?

The verses of the day

Dwelling within the mood

On through the list the day passes away

in school all day

Your what?

In that mood where all the colors are cold

The music screeams of doom

The cold colors

Below the harbor

Away it goes

Reviews

[Letemdangle]

I'm not sure what you are saying, but I'm listening.

[Dark Angel ~]

So... it's about a person's mood throughout the day? Idk, lol xP

[Jazique]

I'm a little lost but, I think I get it. It was a nice simple poem thought using the time of days as verses with our moods making our day. Any ways it was nice.

[Tasha]

I liked it, great job.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Muse]

what a charming little write..........

[Art Sun]

at times we wish to explain each and every verse we express ... the coldness of colors, the day passing away, everything is dwelling within our minds until we release them and they flow away...

well that's my explanation...nice work

[lostboy]

we al llive within our moods...sometimes doom is good ..some things need to die.