Why did they?

Blood dripping down my face

I scream and wail

But wait you must first hear my tale

I was pretty and primped up in lace

As we all got ready to go to dinner

Mother and Father drop the ball

Oh nothing you may think at all

Just they say they think they have found me a winner

No dont worry they say we will stay behind you have fun

Quickly up the stairs I go grab my purse

At the resturant I shake his hand, he is a nurse

By the end of dinner he asks me to go with him and not to run

Despite my fear I go without quarrel

Into his car I travel

Going steady he quickly turns to some gravel

I look at him hoping he is not thinking of doning anything immoral

He stops the car and pulls out a knife
to question him would be crazy

so i slink back trying to seem sleepy and lazy

He slits my throat my dream being shattered i will never be a wife

Reviews

[Jibin]

Good work, nicely done. A different ending.Enjoyed the reading....
:)

[freind's review]

hehe i liked the ryhmes..submissive ending too..i liked it

[Jazique]

Awe that was a little said but, wickedly coolas in great job. You creative with a flow of words showing power and all. Excellent job.

[Kes]

Oh. Ouch.
That's actually pretty damn cool. :) The kinda thing I haven't written in a long time.
Great. :)

[Daisy Morgy]

realy nice flow when i read it good job!

[Akshat♥]

so strange but nicely written piece..
title suits the poem well..
keep writing!!

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

Lawlz

[wolf68]

OH MY GODS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

and it has ryhmes... i never ryhme :)

[wolf68]

wow a poem with a twist