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A Poem by *~DreamDeamon~*
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RANDOM!

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I sit up against that old scared tree.

Watching the lime green bunny rabbit hop.

As it quickly gets closer it starts to get grossier.

The green turns to brown, with red bumps and scratches.

His teeth yellow and large.

Now the bunny is not far off.

It's mouth is wide open, the teeth about to bare down on me.

As I lean back in surprise, I fall into a vortex inside the tree.

Spinning around in all these dimensions.

A family of turqoise turtles rest on mt stomach,

as I land on my back, in a pool filled with pillows.

One of the baby turtles finds it way into my pocket.

The others use my face as an escape root out of the pool.

Colorful cloth snakes start to entangle me

in their different textured patches.

It seems there is hundreds that all engulf me.

Everything goes black but only for a second.

For the snakes and pillows turn into red jello.

I lay stuck in the jello when I feel a nudge at my leg.

A gummy shark starts to swallow my body.

I get encased in its blue and white gummy stomach.

Slowly i nibble my way out appearing in a vast sea of coke a cola.

A drink ive loved since i was little.

The waves crash me hard into some candy cane islands.

 

 

Maybe this is a dream.....

Nah its he world I live in to soothe my stressing dreams......

© 2011 *~DreamDeamon~*


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wild, imaginative, and strange. i like it, and the title, if your asking for a name
Try: my wild dream for a bored world

Posted 13 Years Ago


this was fun and crazy it was awsome.......................

Posted 13 Years Ago


lol, this made me smile. :)))

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is cute (kawaii) I like the image it took me a little bit to understand it in the begining, but this is really good. But, I think you may have to read it again there are some words spelled wrong. take a look.
Thank you
Moon Fixer

Posted 13 Years Ago


For some reason this reminds me of Alice in Wonderland with the tree and rabbit at the beginning...
Also, I love how you get off topic and the randomness of your imagination which makes this scenery more vivid than it is.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very random! :D I liked though. An escape from reality, exactly what everyone needs.

Posted 13 Years Ago


sounds like a nice place to be..i have a sweet tooth...

Posted 13 Years Ago


fantasy is my favorite diversion. cleverly done, very, very good!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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*~DreamDeamon~*

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