The Wanted Power

The Wanted Power

A Poem by *~DreamDeamon~*
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i thought about adding more but yea idk... input

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So much power

So much beauty

A force so strong

Every man wants to harness it

That blue fire

The unpredictability

To harness this power

Would mean eternal glory

A god status if you will

Firey blue beams of energy

To strike at your will. 

© 2011 *~DreamDeamon~*


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this is short but very well written...
power is something which makes you strong..
nice write:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short but getting to the point of how one can obtain power. Power is want, want is need and the pattern continues.

Posted 13 Years Ago


okay, i give , maybe the coffee hasn't kicked in yet but you have me stumped. i love the poem. don't get me wrong, it is nicely formatted and well written, but i don't
have a clue to which power you refer. all i could think of was the battle between luke skywalker and the evil emperor ....?

Posted 13 Years Ago



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*~DreamDeamon~*
*~DreamDeamon~*

Chiloquin, OR



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