Cruelty

Cruelty

A Poem by *~DreamDeamon~*

She is always so mean in her ways

Ice water flows through her veins

Her heart an ice cube of lifeless beating

The cruelty is what keeps her alive

That rush of seeing someone crushed, hurt

Just brings a cold smile to her face

The pain that is written so intricately on their faces

Gives her power, power un-matched by others

Their warm tears streaming down their fleshy cheeks

Gives her what she needs to quench her thirst

Silently she slinks through the shadows

Finding her next victim

Just to laugh at their pain

A laugh so evil

It will send shivers down your spine

The cruelty of the icy veins spews with every word she whispers

Whispering whispering whispering

Those words to break you

© 2011 *~DreamDeamon~*


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Only a heart of burning passion can melt the icy heart of a wicked person. The one thought that comes to mind when I read this

Posted 13 Years Ago


Whew, that was good. You're good. :)
I think you definitely got me here. It's so good that I don't know what to say.

Posted 13 Years Ago


cool


Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice! These words and ideas flow nicely.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i only have one question...just when and where have you met my ex wife?
this is a remarkable reference to the many ugly people i have encountered in my
life and i think that this one has a place in my personal library. awesome!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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i think i know this person :)
"Silently she slinks through the shadows " great line!!!!

okay so now i have had my dark fix....you do this so well!!! excellent write!



Posted 13 Years Ago



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*~DreamDeamon~*
*~DreamDeamon~*

Chiloquin, OR



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