Blood

for a contest

The blood is so warm as it passes my lips

Your blood I want more

I want to taste your sweet necter

You cut your wrists for me to drink

Your blood runs down my neck to my chest

Here let me return the favor

Cut my neck

Drink my blood as I drank yours

You missed some it dripped to your stomach

I'll clean it for you

My tounge stained now and forever

Inyour blood and mine

we are always together

Reviews

[quinfinn]

bloodlust in verse, i love it! well written and very dark and creepy. another terrific poem in your unique style. great write!

[lollipop]

VAMPIRE!!!!

[Kyle]

holy crap! ((this isnt my favorite genre....) But very attention getting and imaginative!

[tigerclaw]

That is potent and dangerous..something about this piece that really slice through me.

[GlamGirl]

Oh wow. This is very powerful.
"Here let me return the favor"
That line is really chilling. The fact that it would be a 'favor'.
Very well written!