Jumbles

ijust dont know wth this one

Being born in this month of May

Makes me stubborn and makes me lazy

But not when it comes to this

I pour my heart out everyday

Pen to paper

Words appear

My hearts desires

My minds fears

What my eyes have seen

My ears have heard

My hands have touched

Its all here

Waiting for the crunch

The crunch from all of you

To critic what is written

Waiting

Hopefully for the good

Because like all great tradgedies

A happy end is in order

With pen to paper

Red pen to be exact

Im hoping for all the answers that i lack

To come from all of you.

Reviews

[Tasha]

very well done.

[Dai Edenburough]

;) well done.

[wolf68]

a truth in its self child

[quinfinn]

and the answer is ... very nicely emoted, well written and complete. an insightful piece full of elegant prose!