The Torture

IDK not finished.... i never seem to finish stories

            Once a girl was walking down a street. There was a man slowly following her. He was making himself not seen. He blended perfectly with the darkness of the night. A feeling over comes her, she feels that she is being followed. She walks faster. She turns a corner and runs to the next hoping to shrug off her feeling.

            Turning the next corner, the man pops out of nowhere and grabs her. He puts a rag covered in chloroform over her mouth. Giving her no time to fight back or even scream. Draging her across the street he throws her into a nearby car.

            As the sun rises the next morning the girls face is all over the news. Her paretns reported her missing, had flyers and everything. The man, the kidnapper sees all this but acts as if he does not care. In, his head and in is heart he really does. He struggles with himself, he wants out but he is already in too deep. He is wishing now he never would have taken those first few steps to follow that girl.

            Hours pass by and the girl finnaly wakes up. Tied to a chair unable to move. Terrified she tries to scream, but its only a mummble. A god awful taste starts to come to her senses, feeling around with her tounge she realizes there is a sock in her mouth. A dirty old nasty sock, with tape to keep it in place. Panicing she looks around the room hoping for something familair. Nothing in the room, it is dark and damp, but boring and plain.

            She calms down, knowing that with fussing comes consequences. In her head she panics, she thinks that everything is going to happen just as it does in the movies. she doesnt know how wrong she is.

            Thew door slowly creaks open, the man walks in. Staring menacingly he stands there for a minute. Contemplating what to do.                              

 

  TO BE CONTINUED

           

Reviews

[Composed_Horror73]

Hey. So the typos in this is understandable as I believe real writers cant be bothered with that stuff until the very end (that's what editors are for lol) but I like where this is headed. I am a bit confused at the beginning. It seems like the typical set-up for a kidnapping story. Very rarely do you encounter stories where the kidnapper feels remorse, but that's what I like about this. Please continue! I crave for more! I'm giving you a low rating as encouragement to finish this story!

[SpokenWord]

A dirty old sock :)

Are you going to continue this story? What did he have in mind for her, before he entered the room he could have drugged her again and released her since she never saw his face but now it is too late he is locked and loaded either way he is facing jail time! They will put him in jail just for the dirty sock alone :)